Group potrait: this will not happen until new players are properly integrated. To make things simple, only those paying will get their character(s) featured.

[@The Dow Dragon], few things to modify.

-Is his last name Kharbihrri or Kharbirri? Please make it consistent. 
-Are there more reasons to hate nobility other than rebelling against his dad? I want you to explain this better.
-Specify the breed of Khajiit.
-1500 coins is not practical on person, divide it by ten.
-The background shows that Jato arrived in Dawnstar before the Kamal invasion, which was before the 3rd of Sun's Height. What was he doing there for the three week period that led to the current IC time?