[quote=@Disciple Cain]
[@Footman]
Let me know what you think of what I have so far. [url]http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/3941250[/url]. Don't want to get ahead of myself on an idea that won't jive.
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Seems fine to me. I was playing with an idea of a race of ancient robot/golem beings, and believed their appearance in this RP to be a feasible one. What you have is similar, and therefore I see no problem with them. As for your champion, the Stone Mother doesn't do anything that offends me, and I think it's quite a well rounded character.

By all means carry on, and let me know when you're done. :)