[@Eviledd1984] Shit, brother. some things are contradicting in your equipment(The MAP for example already as inbuilt servos of construction level. Adding domestic servos is sort of impossible due to it and the paragraphs need to be separated. There are some typos in your profile but most of it is fine. Lore wise. It's ok. Keep in mind that you're character coming from the Sol galaxy and especially Earth would have a unique disposition of actually living under a federal government. A staunchly atheist one on a planet that lead a purge of religion entirely in a massive atheist campaign a long time ago. So, any sort of spiritualism would be suppressed by social shame alone. Play on that if you want to or not. The same with living directly under the Terran Unity. I'd like to see, just a little more on his background. What happened when he first revived. In his life even as a chef he surely would of seen alot just by space faring and being apart of a militant faction. Explore those a little in his personality and background. The core concept is fine though. don't forget. you can take 2 careers as a revived. Maybe as a member of the triangle society, he was trained in something else too? Might as well use the perk while you got it. [@LordofthePies] Accepted. Motherfucking. pretty good. You're starting off with something that can easily path to character development. You're career points are +2 to hit and initiative rolls against plants, bugs and animals of natural or artificial origin. +2 to medicine. I decided to split the stats up because it was a bit of a niche field and it seemed, a bit. yellow in the jello to just disregard entirely as generic medicine buff only. [@dragonmancer] Mostly good, brother. I'd would like to see a little bit on how his race(and him) took to being uplifted. Does your character approve, disagree. That their culture is being wiped, reduced to servants or made stronger. As a big alien on a human dominated galaxy. Does he feel isolated or sometimes vulnerable to the coalition propaganda. ----------------------- @everyone Motherfucking. sorry I went more silent than a saints shitter. I sort of like. Had a sudden fever again and been getting weirdly tired, sweaty and a bit weird in talking. I'm also, motherfucking. waiting on some bcode to make this sheet look less like a blind mans painting and for some reason in my dizziness I didn't just say that. but my sister who waving the wand to make this look less depressing twisting the fingers on the keyboard of life and I'm gonna jsut go ahead and make any changes tomorrow and sort out any additional code coloring myself.