No need to apologize! What you're doing now is generalizing the fight[i]-ing[/i] altogether, which is good if the fight is over in one post. However, I do admit that with an ongoing battle [i]through multiple posts[/i] that the descriptions are a bit lacking. I'm not trying to belittle you, but I do believe you can do so much more!

You're an anime fan yourself, right? Have you ever re-watched a fight scene before? I don't know if everyone knows this - and I believe only people of a select personality do it - but when a movie, animation, or book portrays an event that's so visceral and expressive (also helps if it's authentic and realistic), I would revisit the scene or paragraph(s) again. Maybe you could give it a try, see if it helps!

I know you're an amazing writer - you write and express emotions and interactions better than I do, with a gap so high, something I need to learn for the upcoming Part we'll have. Don't let this be a discouragement!