[quote=@Archmage MC] Oh, ok. No one was posting for a couple days so I decied to go. Figured there were only 8 or so people since Hachi is incapped and your char felt like she wanted to go last as to not ice up everything and the rest aren't in gym. And the ring thing is more her bad luck, I wasn't sure on the doors since people without super strength lifted them just fine. I'll edit stuff if you need me to no problem. How should I edit it? [/quote] Not to be rude but it hadn't been a couple of days. It had been 22 hours. Second I [b][i][u]MADE[/u][/i][/b] sure that [b][i][u]EVERYONE[/u][/i][/b] was in the gym before starting the course. Even with only 8 (which if you count the characters even half) only one has gone and a second volunteered. Honestly the only thing I would have you change is [quote]Light decided to give the course a shot. "Well, I guess I can do this thing. Not many people left."[/quote] and [quote]First around halfway through the obstacle one of the rings broke, causing her to tumble to the ground. Grumbling she grabbed another one and tried again. The second time through, instead of the ring breaking, the peg decided that it had enough of these kids swinging on it and snapped free, causing her to fall again.[/quote]