[@Graviloquence] Finally read the sheet in it's entirety! Sorry about the delay!

It was quite a good read, and Bharzak seems like she's a really well-rounded and compelling character that has a lot of storytelling potential, as well as a simple but well realized history. I quite enjoyed reading the sheet, and I see nothing off about the skills and inventory that need to be addressed, so it gets the Dervish stamp of approval!