[quote=@Lucius Cypher]
[@Mr Allen J]

I could not find a better one because it is the best! Dat tail, dose horns, De scales, THEY SPEAK TO ME!

I have no regrets. I will live and die by my decision!
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It's verging on softcore porn, dude. lol

Now, since I got my Co-GM privileges back, I can rightfully [s]shit on[/s] judge everyone's character sheets, and I'll start with yours, [@Lucius Cypher]. The main thing that stood out to me was her backstory... it doesn't really make a whole lot of sense. Being raised by animals just doesn't make sense when no animal ever does that (And not to mention that Grimm [i]probably[/i] should have killed her long before she was found). Being hidden under a rock just doesn't make sense.

I also don't get her weapon description. You're [i]basically[/i] saying that she's strong and durable enough to punch Grimm to death without any semblance, right? I don't recall anyone in RWBY-canon being strong without a Semblance. It works for Yang because her Semblance is strength, and she has a punching weapon. Idk, she could use a better weapon description.

Also, everyone's supposed to be a student of Beacon (Meaning the fall took place a short while ago), so how/why is she going to the ruins of it?