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And Grey? Well she didn’t want to be on his bad side… again. She sighed hard and started to make a beeline towards the Auditorium. Deciding not to take the detour after all.

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Smart girl. Hell hath no fury like a slacker's scorn.

[@Xiro Zean] Don't worry, you're golden Pony Boy. I can't imagine a situation where I would complain about a post being too long and you are free to provide constructive criticism as long as you respect Rule #2.

[@Hippo AF] There are a few things that I find problematic with Draco at the moment. To begin with, his ability honestly sounds more like an Enhancement to me, mostly due to the simple fact that it could be explained by science, while most other Abilities cannot. I won't make you change it if you don't want to, but I'm having a hard time imagining how he will keep up with the rest of the cast as the story progresses. As it stands, it really isn't an ability worthy of being considered a B rank, so if you do wish to keep it as is, you should probably bring his rank down to a C perhaps even D. And another thing to keep in mind, while the RP is fueled by pure Rule of Cool, I will still expect a broken arm to be treated like a broken arm. No amount of pain suppression is going to let you use that limb normally, as there will be plenty of things that will simply impossible for it to do from a mechanical standpoint.

That brings me to his personality. The will to throw his life and the lives of those around him is not really something that any of his instructors would have fostered. The Godslayers, especially the ones that are eligible to be sent on missions, are precious weapons that cannot be replicated, so I find it difficult to imagine that any tactic that involves sacrificing one for any and all missions to be something the higher ups would ever consider acceptable. So while I am not telling you to change his personality, just keep in mind that those strategies will be met with considerable, if not insurmountable, opposition.


And finally, my last real concern is, admittedly, a rather nit picky one. We already have a completely unrelated Godslayer named Drake, so having another one named Draco just seems to be needlessly redundant. Again, it's a nit picky concern, thus one I am not particularly worried about compared to the other two, but still something that I felt should be mentioned.

The main thing I would like you to focus on at the moment is his ability, or rather his lack thereof. Whatever you decide, just let us know when you are ready for us to take another look at him.