[@FallenTrinity] Well I will say the Mech profile seems fine, obviously I havent quite figured how to work in all the specs for the mecha character sheet but I can see your machine being pretty well adapted.

But as far as the actual character, youre better off creating a totally new one. What youve got submitted is suited to an alternative earth 'realistic' style RP. Real world countries like the USA and what not do not exist on Orio, also our RP characters would not be part of any national military as they are in the fortune state (they may be ex military or from a different reigon originally) Also I would be using Drawn/CG images for our characters as apposed to real life pictures.

So in short, Mech is fine, character needs overhaul.