[@Skinner35] For a first attempt, it's pretty damn good. I only have two major issues with it.

1. You seem to have forgotten the "Personality" section, should be simple enough to fix.

2. Cybernetics wouldn't be carried over from Earth to Hell, once Toby was in hell he would need to get cybernetics from a mechanist. Also, what time, exactly, does Toby's life take place? A Thieves Guild is mentioned but there are shotguns and stuff.