Crud, I just realized a few things. Arya, if I re-read your post right, you took control of the character I was using and then left it at that. I have no hook to write a reply from. It would be a tremendous help if you could delete the line where he/she states that they're from this territory and called Alcoro Hensieta.

Twannyman, please rewrite your post. The wife needs to be removed, and I need a hook to write a reply from.