Guys, continue to work on your CSes because a good majority of these characters are bland. I don't know if you guys had an idea before you made the CS or you are trying to make the character as you build the CS. Basic grammar and spelling; and I mean basic. Periods. Capitals.

To everyone else looking over this game, we are still open to more interest. I am looking for characters with some life and personality that can fit this concept. So far, the only one I would outright approve is The Girl and it is not because of her CS design. I can just see the character she is trying to make.

Even though the Background area is empty for this initial segment. Try to have an idea of what you want to fill in there and maybe that will help develop it more. I am not looking for dissertations. I am just looking for life. I don't know how else to explain it. But a lot of these characters are just empty.