[quote=@Prince of Seraphs]
I just watched it. I think the real problem is that literally nothing is happening. It transitions from character to character to character and until the last like twenty seconds they are all either standing still or walking. And the like three action shots at the end looked kind of slow and clunky.
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You can get some good stuff out of people not actively fighting. Set up character dynamics, give a feel to their personality, yadda yadda, but when you just slapdash throw them onto the screen, don't even bother with linking them properly to the song, and then have shitty animation as a whole that you can't even hide, then yeah it goes to shit.