I have like 4 RPs going on on this site, and when 2 of them have kids... it blows my mind a little that that seemed to be the demographics of this site. Might have just been a coincidence, of course. His eyes are the wrong color, and his skin isn't as smooth as described. And I can't really pinpoint what else doesn't quite work about him. I do think it's part that I can't really put the image of this guy I know in real life in this fictional world. I'm getting inspired by ferrofluid, and the idea of levitating rock formations, and these renderings of biblical seraphim that are just massive and terrifying. I have this idea of the skull of a fallen angel, miles high, being a part of this landscape. And an idea of fortress walls - I don't quite know how to describe it - that are solid at the ground level, but extend up, separating, getting less dense, and levitating apart from one another.