Welcome to this story and this forum [@Umbratilis]! Always a great day when a stalker turns into a participant ^^ 
Great character by the way, but I suggest the same things Rekaigan mentioned, would make it easier on my old eyes to read (yes, I am old - almost ancient some would say! ... Okay, maybe not ancient, but I do feel very old).


Oh yea, and this "ancient being" will likely have a post up later. I actually have a question for my next post [@tex]: Does Thorisa have horses? Or is there an animal that the inhabitants tend to use for the chores we have horses for? Random question, I know...