[@Themerlinhawk] I read the premise of the OoC a few times—mostly I meant a summary for all ten characters currently involved. XD I may very well have missed many a detail, but correct me if the gist of things below is wrong. [h2]Relationship Tree[/h2] [b]Toki[/b] (tried to help Mary) | [b]Elenei[/b] [b]Mary [/b] [b]Andri [/b] / (Helping Andri) (student of magic) [b]Ian [/b] (trying to kill Lucien) | | (angel hunter) / | [b]Tatiana[/b] [b]Fran[/b] [b]Lucien[/b] (arms dealer for Lucien) (saved Mary & Toki) (angel renegade) / [b]Donny[/b] (no one knows) [b]Alma Grim[/b] (no one knows) [b]Lazarus[/b] (necromancer) | [b]Shaylee[/b] (Lazarus' Apprentice) The main plot feels like it's Andri taking out Lucien (who took out two fellow students while in pursuit of Hazumi). There's a [i]lot[/i], and I mean [i]a lot[/i] of other side stories going on, from Elenei's underground brothel/organization to Lazarus' angel hunting and Fran saving two other main characters. As much as I love collab posts, it is admittedly quite difficult to follow each character's separate story arc as it weaves in and out of other players' posts, especially as exits and entrances aren't clearly labeled and it's sometimes not even clear how some characters arrived at a specific destination in another person's post. Case [i]en[/i] point, the last post with Andri. The last thing I remember reading about him was his meeting with Elenei, and the most recent post begins with Andri bleeding on the concrete of some unknown location. I most definitely missed something, so if I managed to skip the entirety of what happened there, go ahead and point me to the post, since I'm super confused. That being said, there's some pretty decent writing here, and I'm excited to jump in. Roanne, being a 'good of the people' sort of vigilante, probably won't mix too well in a brothel or anywhere remotely close to a rocket launcher wielding angel hunter, so the two best jumping points seem to be either running into Andri's slowly growing group of allies or party crashing the Toki trio. There's still some work I need to be doing on Roanne's CS, though, so I'll post updates as I make corrections and such. [b]EDIT:[/b] [@Wind Wild] So I've added another picture to get an idea of what Roanne looks when she's not all armored up (which would be exceptionally rare, actually). I've also made adjustments to the following sections: [b]-The Bond:[/b] I've added more detail about the individual bonds to clarify the points we discussed and hopefully they're better suited to the RP. [b]-The Ward:[/b] I've added more detail and removed the part about her being able to sense death. [b]-The Sword:[/b] I've simply removed the extra features from her weapon. It's a regular ol' thing now. [b]-History:[/b] I took some creative liberties again, so feel free to tell me if it's not a good direction for implementing reincarnation and her wide array of angelic abilities. There's just a few notes on reincarnation and some clarification of her earth-born nature and work. There's also the question of guardian angels being able to see auras. I wasn't sure what that meant, exactly, but I would like to implement it into her abilities.