[quote=@Vocalia]
[@tobiax]I personally have no meaningful feedback to give to you. I think your latest post is pretty good, but I'd reckon that the other native English speakers could give something more useful for your improvement.

[@Draconis Nevyn][@Fish of Oblivion][@RBYDark][@Psyker Landshark]
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Friendly reminder that I am Scottish and you speak better english than myself, Vo :P