No, it's awesome! I assumed Aria's dad would be someone who could control others. He just seems the type xD 

Ah crap, I didn't put Bracknell's awareness of their escape. Mind if I do that next post? 

Also, speaking of daddy dearest, I took control of him for just a bit. Let me know if you want me to revise. I'd like for you to control him, but I felt like I needed to apprehend him to get the plot moving xD