[@HalfOfLancelot] has bought up a heap of points that I don't really need to repeat, but the expectations is one part I would definitely tidy up. Take out the "I Wants" and reduce the size. At the moment it comes across as very rule based and might push people away.

Other than that, it looks mostly fine but I didnt read it into depth. Basically try to make it fun, bright, and inviting. You want people to look and go "wow!" whenever they see your thread.

But it could also be that it's a busy time of year with exams and NaNoWriMo.