[@AbandonedIntel] so far. not bad. Kirk is adorbs. Just don't break the fourth wall too often. When you do it, make it count. i don't want that to be used and abused since that would cause the audience to lose their suspension of disbelief. also a dog that detects evil and bullshit, he'd bark everywhere because there are so many grey lines xD for example, sure some of the harts are considered 'evil' because of their deeds but they are pretty upfront with their intentions unless you're Bianca whose just insane. They tell you what they want and if you cause them struggle, they will deal with it accordingly. hell even a good hero can be barked at because no one is 100 percent good, or 100 percent evil. We can say he can sense when something is not right - like if you guys stumble upon a sketchy situation, but for him to detect evil immediately, i feel like that's kinda hard because even evil people aren't completely evil - unless they're psychotic, that's a different story. what you have so far seems good! just finish up her history and alias name and we'll go from there. Nothing wrong with going the non-offensive route! hell, Sabrina (NPC) - which btw guys - Vicious is making into a main perspective character is a cat xD she does cat things LOL. which probably isn't completely useful on the battlefield but still holds potential. I'm intrigued at how you'll use her powers among the chaos.