[@MonstrousMan] I want to see you expand on his personality a bit more. Here are some question to help you, litter some language on that profile. What is is attitude towards his people place in the Coalition? What is his attitude to humans and being almost constantly surrounded by them outside of small coalition territories. What is his motive for killing. Killing can take a lot out of you, is it simply for the thrill of violence or does he lack other skills he has faith in? You don't have to answer any of those but feel free to use them. I still need a clearer distinction on Yul society. I don't know what technological age they are in. What faiths, are they isolationists. Are they pro-coalition, against it. ectr. If they are mysterious, why are they. What policies and practices as a people would have to do to retain that mysterious nature. Do they control the internet, do they stop any citizen having mail or radio contact with outsides. Do they effectively have a total "blackout" with the only people allowed in being politicians and traders in special locations? Do many YUl leave this planet if it is this crippling restrictive or are the majority of them hut dwelling, hermits that want nothing of the outside world. Did they react positively to first alien contact or see it only as a problem? [hider] Starting Credits: 3500 (You got a good amount of blood credits) Age: you've been around enough to accumulate some funds. Special Field: You get paid more than normal mercs who simply brutalize people. Common Demand: The Coalition aggressive unity project and human paranoia means that your market is both condensed and pretty high. Heavy Competition: A sudden influx of pre-space war aliens in the coalitions mean that alien warriors and killers are dime a dozen. Notable: because you can speak and your races history you get picked for some jobs. Unknown Planet: Despite rumors you are not well known, this leads to your race being passed over for races that are historically good at certain tasks. Starting Points: I can't really calculate this without knowing your races culture and life style between your time in the laboratory and now. Everything else you have is good. ---------------------------------------------- You're career bonus is: I'm going to have to change your selected bonuses. But I think you'll like my substitutes, especially "contracts" side effect of your work. You can gain a [color=red] HINT [/color] like this when an artificial security system is in 5 meters of you and not in combat/or currently being hit. When rolling/ jumping or diving into cover. You gain +2 to your auto dodge. -------------------------------------------------------- [b]Side Effects:[/b] [b] Old Enemies:[/b] You are identified and known which can lead to random encounters with possible enemies new and old. [b]Hit-man Hunted:[/b] The nature of killing is that it breeds killers. People out for revenge, from alien peasants to criminals will send other hit men to kill you. [b]Identified Murder Death Kill:[/b] You are of suspect by human and alien authorities alike. Expect to get harassed by security constantly. Terminal checks up will be a pain in the ass and you don't want to be caught by the guards at a place where the law process is swift and cruel. [b]Contacts:[/b] you have contacts to a small guild of assassin operatives from your years of work. Every mission, as long as you have signal. You may make 1 protected, un-hackable call to them and ask for a piece of information. Or, you may ask for a false ID at the cost of 2500 credits. Allowing you bypass the "Identified" debuff, as long as you don't do anything to blow your cover. this ID is lost when your cover is blown or at the end of the mission. Deleted, so the operatives won't be traced. Information can be anything but the operatives aren't all knowing. If they can't answer a question they will provide the best they got and hang up "AKA: Who is behind these pirate raids" "No idea but there five pirates coming through here yearly. The regular target is Gjalin 2" Don't worry, about. the motherfucking. start daye, too much. brother. I did keep you waiting, so I'm ok with you submitting this after a a day or two after we start. [/hider]