More reviews, this time for [@SushiJaguar] and [@The Dow Dragon]. Good CSes, minimal problems.

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A few minor spelling/grammar errors. Not many or enough to be a real issue. Just mentioned for reasons of polishing sheet.
We like flaws, though they do not all need to be directly problematic for his IC operations. With the necessary tie-ins, we think terrible cook is just as fitting a flaw as naïve, despite the latter being far greater risk in a setting like this than the former.


A few extra skills wouldn’t hurt. They do not at all need to be relevant to the rescue mission. Anything from Whittling toys for younglings to cooking to being good at navigating spaceports or knowledge of imperial architecture could fit. Mind you, those are just random examples, not specific suggestions.


We realise now that it was a super unclear question, but this one
[b]Something got you to join this mission. What was it? What events shaped your life?[/b]
Is meant to be asking for a more full bio, not just immediate motivation for the current mission. Our apologies for the lack of clarity there.




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The gold bands on the description: What exactly are they made from? I don’t know of any material that could protect against sort of blade or blaster attack and not be armor.  




As it currently stands, I do not believe he would qualify for the specialisation of Jedi Healer. It is not only about skill with Force Heal, but also requires a fairly significant amount of traditional medical knowledge, as well as experience in the field.


In order to already have the specialisation at this age, he would have had to study and make use of the traditional skills throughout his time as a padawan. While his first master could probably have started teaching him, he would’ve had to maintain his study of it independently while working under his second master - this is definitely possible, but if he did this I’d like to see note of it in his bio.


In addition, there is no ‘Healer’s Academy’ per se. A Jedi looking to further his knowledge in the area has a few options available. One would be to continue independent study in their downtime just as they could as a padawan. Another would be to get special dispensation to have fewer missions while they spent time based in the H’ratth Praxeum. Finally, they could get special dispensation from the Council to attend a regular Medical College somewhere in the galaxy and gain official qualifications.


With sufficient qualifications it's possible the Council would grant the title without much live experience, but it would be a more guaranteed title if he also then spent a year in the field, focused on solving medical problems. The most obvious place to gain experience is on the battlefield, but Jedi with medical knowledge are quite useful in solving other problems in the galaxy too - he may have received occasional missions to help contain and cure an outbreak, or perhaps solve a medical issue for someone important to the Republic somewhere. The Council does take note of a Jedi’s skills and tendencies and assign them appropriate missions even before they are given a specific specialisation title.


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