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[@Polybius] So ? 
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Your going to want to add details as we go along Ash, only criticism (constructive, I assure you) is your naming conventions. Draugaria is an evocative name-dragons being the word that comes to mind-fitting for a war-minded gladiatorial race, while 'Alexis Hunter' is pretty generic. A trick I've seen people do is sort of invent a language as they go-sticking to certain syllables. Maybe think of what language the Draugaria would speak and then translate the word 'Hunter' in that way. Am I making sense or pre-coffee rambling?