[@BlackHoleKin] Your Biography and description are still too vague and under developed.

For you description talk about his frame, so is he thin or fat? Lanky or bulky? strong or weak? etc, talk about how the face looks, does he have any scars, does he have any other outstanding features?
I know describing someone in detail is a bit difficult, it took me a good bit of time to get better at it - best thing to do is look at you own body and write a paragraph describing it, then use that as a basis on how to describe someone elses, it's how I do it ^_^

For your Bio try and describe the journey from the moment he died to how he got to the Watchdogs of farron, why did he want to join them, where'd he hear it from etc.
Try and make a story from your Bio, even if this means delving into the lore and geography of the Dark souls world, I would at least want 2 decent sized paragraphs for this area; ideally.