[@Darkmoon Angel]
I was dubious about the "creation" of a pyromancy flame - in lore one does not create one, it's like an extension of your own understanding, the more you learn about pyromancies the more the flame develops up until the point where you have access to a pyromancy flame; so yeah technically you do create your own pyromancy flame.
Anyway, couple of problems, your personality seems to suggest that you've already joined the Watchdogs of Farron; that's not the case, the first post you do will be your joining, so modify your personality to actually explain what she is like before that moment - try and make it as detailed as you can - a good detailed paragraph will be sufficient. 
Same goes for your description and bio - just try and flesh them out a bit more.
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This roleplay will require you to produce at least 2 paragraphs of detail per post - if anyone here feels that they cannot meet that level please let me know.
In terms of everyones CS' please try and make them detailed as possible - the more detail they have the closer to a human they become, in part making roleplaying with them far easier.