I hope you got some good sleep! Sleep's just a tad bit important. If you don't mind my asking, what time zone are you in? Crazy. I like me some good crazy. xD And yep, yep! I'm a little confused as to what the poison did to Pahn. It caused some sort of relapse, forcing out his full potential? I don't think I know enough about what is to come to give any decent critiques or suggestions... Which brings me to another face-palm moment at how scatterbrained I feel right now. What of the plot that you have in mind would you be willing to divulge? We could take that to PM if you'd rather.