[quote=@The 42nd Gecko]
[@Banana] I'm just a player, not a GM, so you have absolutely no requirement to take my words to heart.

But your powers feel a bit video gamey. Not saying what you do is wrong, but the description of how you do them feels like a Moba Champion skillset rather than a roleplaying character.
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[@Banana] that's kind of what I think as well. You even went through the trouble of marking your character's "ultimate" with a different color.

I'd consider some editing to make it more natural.