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Everything looks pretty solid from where I'm sitting, she's a pretty compelling character already that reminds me a lot of one of my other characters, Marassa. No-nonsense 20 something warrior chicks ftw.

Only thing I suggest adding more to is her weaknesses; lack of magical talent is lack of a weakness and more of just a state of being for most people, and being an indifferent asshat towards strangers is more along the lines of a personality trait, a somewhat detrimental one, but still nothing that really will make much of a difference past casual interactions with people.
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Ornery warrior chicks ftw, Solveig x Piper x Marassa.