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Everything looks pretty solid from where I'm sitting, she's a pretty compelling character already that reminds me a lot of one of my other characters, Marassa. No-nonsense 20 something warrior chicks ftw.

Only thing I suggest adding more to is her weaknesses; lack of magical talent is lack of a weakness and more of just a state of being for most people, and being an indifferent asshat towards strangers is more along the lines of a personality trait, a somewhat detrimental one, but still nothing that really will make much of a difference past casual interactions with people.
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Done.

Poor Balance: Unfortunately, Piper does not share Sagax's uncanny ability to always stay on his feet. Though her armor helps in anchoring her, given the right amount of force, Piper can be toppled relatively easily. 

I remembered something I wrote for Sagax's backstory about him feinting an attack and knocking Piper off balance to score a hit on her during a spar, so I went off of that.