[@RedDusk]

Looking good so far, just gotta wait for a bit for approval.

A few nitpicks though, cos I am a fussy butt:
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[*] Replace the indenting spaces at the start of some of your paragraphs with tabs or just get rid of them completely.
[*] Add the name of your magic somewhere in your magic section. You can look at the approved sheets to see examples.
[*] Capitalise the name of your theme song title to "The Bird with a Broken Wing"
[*] This last one's a really big unnecessary nitpick so ignore it if you feel like it, but replace the single quotation marks (') around Sandy with double quotation marks (")
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Haha, sorry for having to deal with a nag like me but it would just be more consistent that way [s]plus I'll be able to sleep at night[/s]. Cheers, bud.