[@Crimson Raven][hider=Feedback]It looks well made except for a few areas to add in on. 1) You need to fix some of the spelling, this being an advanced RP and all. Make 'Unknowist' Unbeknownst and 'elvin' Elven as examples. Just re-read and make sure you fix those areas. 

Tell me what country/nation Marcus was dropped off in as an Orphan. If it's in the North, at least. If its in the Southland, there are ever shifting kingdoms and fiefdoms and it's quite hard to survive the monsters there. 

Also, I don't want anyone particularly powerful, but since he's mostly an illusionist, I can make him an Adept at least. Fairly advanced, especially for someone over a century old so it makes sense. But sure, he can refer to himself as Archmage^^

I'll say your magical wards are as hard as iron. Dwarven steel is fairly advanced. 

Also when you've edited, I'll PM you further info on magic.  

ALSO, the character is a well made one and I look forward to seeing him in the IC.[/hider]