I really enjoy your writing; it is enjoyable to read, you describe things well, and as a role player it is also easy to reply to.

I've had a lot of trouble with past RP partners that either write very little (often poorly written) or they are too wordy and it becomes difficult to respond. I'm not picky or anything, but it's really noticeable with some writers. In all honesty, I haven't seen anything that I think needs improving.