[@Apokalipse]

Ahh... there's that angsty heartbreak I was looking for. First Leos with his depressing Grandpa, and now a poor, unstable kitty-cat. Next up, my own Nord widower with emotional baggage heavier than his 8 year old daughter!

Tsavi is good, barring the translation skill she has. You haven't stated what language she can translate; if you're keeping it, you'll need to describe how she learnt it. Unless her translation skill is Ta'agra, in which case she'll have probably been brought up on that language and Tamrielic simultaneously. 


[@LadyTabris]
Thanks for getting the sheet done so quickly - she looks great so far, but there are some issues.

Now, I can't find information on entry requirements to do with age when it comes to the College of Winterhold - but I have doubts they would allow a 13 year old girl with no prior knowledge in magic to join. In Skyrim, you do have to demonstrate a spell to be allowed in, and that's as an adult.

This could be easily rectified if she learnt some spells from a mage prior to joining; perhaps when she was 13, her father hired a guard for their travels; or perhaps a friend joined them. They could have taught Aveca some basics in magic, and say after 2 years, she joins the College. I'd say 15 with knowledge of magic is more applicable than 13 with no magic.

Oh, and from what I can see all of those spells are from Oblivion, but please make sure none of them are from Skyrim, just in case I've missed one.


Other than that, I can find no fault with them! Unless [@Leos Klien] has something to add, if you fix those things I've mentioned, these two fine ladies can go into the CS tab.