[@Raddum]
Ritz looks good to me. The only notable comments or thoughts I would've made got brought up with Marche. I like how you've put it all together, and the job choices make sense. I've honestly been expecting the hero side of this to be weaker than the villain side - to make it more difficult for them to survive - and so far that's how it's looking. I might even need to bring in a character to help them.

I'm gonna keep dealing with the 'work in progress' sections of mine.

Edit: Starting to feel pretty damn dizzy now. We'll see where it takes me.