Nice posts everyone! However, I have a few nitpicks that I wanna point out just to make sure everyone's on the same page. [@Nallore] - The robot isn't present yet. I'll make an improvement in my next post to indicate which NPCs are present in the scene if that's alright with you :) [@Ashevelendar] - It's STC, rather than STR, and your quotes are a little distant from your character's dialogue sentences. Just a few minor fixes and you're gold :D [@LokiLeo789] - Nice post. One issue, Headmaster Udina was the only one who spoke. No woman went on stage, at least I don't think. I'll try to make my language a little more clear next time. [@Archmage MC] - There wasn't exactly security at the gates but it isn't an important detail. Both of the guards were in the auditorium. lol Like I told Nallore, I'll make sure that the On-Camera NPC roster's improved so people get a good idea who's where. Again, they are just nitpicks, and I just wanted to point them out so other posters won't misconstrue information when making their own posts, and to make sure everything flows smoothly is all. :) Thank you all for bearing with me on this, I really wanna make you guys have fun too ^_^