That is so mean, haha you're evil. It would totally work though, it would piss him off so bad. 

I feel bad for Rowland a little though, I gotta say. He has all this hate being thrown at him, and he's just playing the part he was told. 

They sound like it :)

Edit: You know what would be amusing...if you wanted to. You never said anything about what happened to the vampire that turned Eleanora. We could spin it where Eleanora and Maxen were turned by the same vampire.