[@Shoryu Magami] Heavy-handed, at least in my mind, has the connotation of being awkward, rough, and poorly done. If it's done /well/, I would no longer call it heavy-handed. Long-winded is slightly negative, but not as much. What you speak of sounds more like complete, or thorough, possibly well-considered. One gives you the entire picture. The other slams it in your face and breaks your nose. Not talking about anime and such for incomplete stories. I mean solely books, where it feels cheap to make me pay three times for a story when you never said I was going to have to. The reader who grew up with books as they used to be expects a story to usually finish in one volume. The longer plot may take more, but there should be some sort of conclusion. Not nothing but questions -- unless that is a deliberate stylistic choice (often for final endings, where there is not a book that comes after) and not merely a way to sell more books. I wasn't suggesting the books as research, but as something you might enjoy. If you don't have time for reading, that's a separate issue. I don't think I've ever encountered an author where painstakingly thorough detail has been done well. I've only seen it where it was handled poorly. If you could suggest a book or two you feel does it and does it well, I'd like to take a look, just to see precisely what you mean by this. Nor did I say anything about your story -- it's not even out yet; I'll read it or not but that won't be for a while yet, by the sound of things. I'm not saying you should write anything other than what you see fit; certainly I dislike the idea of selling out as well. But there is a difference between /missing/ details -- things that should be included and are not -- and the stylistic choice of how much detail is put into any description. Necessary details -- ones with particular significance -- I would not consider optional. It is the rest, the fine focus as opposed to the gross, where any flexibility might be found. Missing details is simply poor writing.