Don't worry about it, it was great! Think my next one is at risk of being slightly 'meh' given me being about a week or so "out of practise" but it shall improve once I get back into it, I'm sure :P 

You tell him, Neta! XD Oh, this is gonna be SO entertaining *rubs hands together evilly* Daddy is not impressed, not in the slightest O_O
In hindsight I kinda wish I'd swapped out Qanarr for Merak and kept him alive instead because I had some little evil ideas involving making Bol a liiittleee jealous, but alas D: haha