[@LostDestiny] Let's see, there really isn't any glaring flaws...I'm not sure about her being in Golem's Hand due to her using Takeover magic. I'll have to consult my Co-GM's about that. Besides that I would like a little more of her history; key experiences she had while on her own, how she came to learn her magic, and her reasoning behind joining Golem over Harpy.

[@pkken] Hmm...that's tricky. In my opinion slayer magic is powerful and versatile enough on it's own, especially when comes to RP where you have the license to evolve the magic in a different than the original. I think it would be better to add it later as the character progresses.