[@Bright_Ops], 

Your character sheet is fine except for a few small things; 

1. Casting any genjutsu through your voice requires quite a bit of training, so I'll allow you to start doing that a little bit after you become a chuunin. As of now, handsigns are still needed. With the assistance of the voice, I'll allow you to pull 'Only two handsigns needed' for any Genjutsu. 

2. Air Bullets, because it is said to be able to subdue entire groups of shinobi at a time, is going to be a B ranked technique. Chuunin leveled. So not yet. If you really want it, you can make a custom technique that only can hit one or two people at a time, making it then C ranked. 

3. Do note that like any genjutsu, a Hyuuga using the Byakugan, or one who already has great experience in Genjutsu (As in somebody who is a Jounin and focuses on Genjutsu mostly) would be able to tell your genjutsu and break it rather easy. 



Make these changes then let me know, and I'll be able to accept it.