[@Kal-El] Why you gotta ninja post me, man? DENIED >=C. 

Kidding. 


Anyways, a few things I want to point out; 

1. Interesting idea, I like it. 

2. You're not the current clan leader, your cousin is the current leader. You will be once you're old enough. 

3. As far as your character knows, Ryu is a boy. Just a note. 

4. For Eight-Trigrams; a Genin is only capable of up to 24 palms. Anymore will rip your muscles, and make you pass tf out. 

5. Orbiting Heaven, is a C rank and will drain your Chakra by alot. Cause it's pretty powerful. 


Adjust those and gimme that background please!