[@Pudding]: While I like what you have so far, I'd like it if you ordered things in the bio format I've got set up already so it's a bit easier to look through and know you filled everything in. ^^;

A couple of images don't seem to be working, and I think you should change her name to a real Japanese name since I can't find anything about that anywhere. ^^;

Please don't take this as rejection or anything, though. I legitimately really like what you have so far and just think you need to tweak some things.