[@The Spectre] All right, so here's what I've got right now. [b][u]The Good[/u][/b][list][*]It hadn't occurred to me that there might be people trying to escape the Zone, but needing "professional" help to do it; since, after all, they will be treated by the cordons as [i]contaminated[/i], and criminal. This is very clever! He's like a reverse-smuggler and I like that aspect a lot.[*]You've raised a lot of questions in a good way. I assume you're prepared to explain where he is gathering the supplies he gives out to the needy, especially in a manner which does not clash with his personality. (Since I assume he's not willing to steal to acquire these goods.) Saving that for the IC instead of laying it all out here is smart.[*]Good choice in guns! It will not make sense for a significant percentage of weapons (or characters, for that matter) to be from the Americas, since shipping weapons across an [i]ocean[/i] is difficult enough, not to mention the Zone's borders.[*]Cool photos! One of my roleplaying pet peeves is when the entire cast of "ordinary" people is twenty supermodels and actresses from various [i]The CW[/i] programs. He looks like a normal bloke and his "armor" makes sense; it even has an interesting ethnic flair about it![/list][u][b]Improvements Needed[/b][/u][list][*]I didn't specify this so it's not your fault, but it hasn't been thirty years since the war ended. I'm thinking between 5 and 15 years. Being born [i]in[/i] the Zone is impossible (at least at age 34).[*]If English is not your first language then don't worry about this, but there are some minute grammatical errors sprinkled throughout the profile.[*]Going back to the nickname stuff, English will be the common language spoken by Europeans, in addition to their native tongues. So if they name you after a Hungarian drink, expect it to be mispronounced, shortened, and otherwise totally butchered. My character is Scottish and his booze-related nickname, "Buckie" ([url=https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Buckfast_Tonic_Wine]Buckfast[/url]), is much easier to remember.[/list] And everything I didn't mention is fine, so your profile definitely has more good than bad. There are very minor things to fix.