[quote=@The1Rolling1Boy] I just noticed something... I'm the only one with a villain like character... Hmmmmm Well then... I guess it's going to be me and thief/"assassin" [/quote] Just don't expect to have much to do, if your character doesn't find a way to get in the story, or the others find a way to do so for you. By the way, your writing still needs a lot of improvements. The verbs are all out of tense, the punctuation is not done so well/the text could be more spaced and, most of all your choice of symbols to indicate things is kinda against the usual writing manners as well. You either indicate thoughts/whisper by writing it in italic, [i]like this part here[/i], not by putting them between brackets, {like this one}. I mean, English is not my first language, so I don't set a bar too high for the grammatical level of my RPs, but there's somethings that just won't do.