[quote=@KoL]
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Just don't expect to have much to do, if your character doesn't find a way to get in the story, or the others find a way to do so for you.

By the way, your writing still needs a lot of improvements. The verbs are all out of tense, the punctuation is not done so well/the text could be more spaced and, most of all your choice of symbols to indicate things is kinda against the usual writing manners as well.

You either indicate thoughts/whisper by writing it in italic, [i]like this part here[/i], not by putting them between brackets, {like this one}. I mean, English is not my first language, so I don't set a bar too high for the grammatical level of my RPs, but there's somethings that just won't do.
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Yeah... I am horrible when it comes to punctuation. I am learning quite a bit about how to roleplay properly through this thing, because what I'm used to is more of a really laid back and freeform rps like in kik group chats. Please bare with me and I am trying to figure out a way for my character to join the story line