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[@Chicogal] Hey, Chicogal! There are just a few things you need to fix before we can accept Rain! First, please keep in mind that Verona is literally in the middle of nowhere; it's a small town with a convenient [b]Community College[/b], not a University. Changing that and Primary School to Elementary (ages 5-10) or Middle (ages 11-13) School will be needed because Verona, Washington is in the United States, after all. Next, we just require you add a bit more to her personality section-- it's a bit too small for our liking and we believe you could really add more life to this character with a bit more details thrown in. 

Finally! We just need you to putt a bit more work into the Weakness section of her powers. Personally, the GMs and I thought it would be better to take out her ability to conjure water and instead require her to be near water in order to take control of it. Doing this will result in a balanced and interesting weakness for her, which would be great! Also, it could replace the weakness of her being weak to fire as usually water beats fire in most cases.

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[@Shadow Daedalus] Shadow! How's it hanging? James is looking pretty decent, but we just need to you tweak a feeew things before we can accept him into our lovely cast. Number one: we feel as though you can add more to his looks and personality sections. Adding a bit more about his actual appearance, like the shape of his eyes or his hair color or something, will really help beef up his looks section a bit. Also, we would love to know more about James than just his anti-social tendencies. 

And number two: Powers! We just need you to limit a few things to make his abilities more balanced. His ability to negate others would be better touch-based at first, and perhaps while his character grows his power can grow into more ranged-based skills. With this, in the beginning, he will only be able to negate powers while grabbing on to someone. As for mental protection from telepaths, we say take that out. It does not make sense with his negation abilities until he is able to negate powers through range. Finally, he should be able to be hurt by ascendant powers, merely because an ascendant's abilities become physical once let loose. A fireball does not equal someone's ability to manipulate fire-- it 's still gonna hit him not matter what. Anyway, make those few fixes and James should be good! Thank you!

Next two will be done soon!