[quote=@Liriia]
Got some apps to discuss...

[@Chicogal] Hey, Chicogal! There are just a few things you need to fix before we can accept Rain! First, please keep in mind that Verona is literally in the middle of nowhere; it's a small town with a convenient [b]Community College[/b], not a University. Changing that and Primary School to Elementary (ages 5-10) or Middle (ages 11-13) School will be needed because Verona, Washington is in the United States, after all. Next, we just require you add a bit more to her personality section-- it's a bit too small for our liking and we believe you could really add more life to this character with a bit more details thrown in. 

Finally! We just need you to putt a bit more work into the Weakness section of her powers. Personally, the GMs and I thought it would be better to take out her ability to conjure water and instead require her to be near water in order to take control of it. Doing this will result in a balanced and interesting weakness for her, which would be great! Also, it could replace the weakness of her being weak to fire as usually water beats fire in most cases.

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My thought in conjuring water wasn't so much creating it as drawing it up from the soil or the air, and I thought it'd make for a development in her powers later on. But if that's not okay, I'll change it to what you've suggested :P 

Done everything else!

EDIT: I was also thinking about her not having discovered her powers yet. Would that be alright?