No, not at all! As a matter of fact, I enjoy it. Your posts are lovely; I'm really digging the images you've used, too! I know I've said it before, but I really appreciate the thought you put into your writing. Thoughts as I read your post;


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- This is so spooky

- I'm glad I don't live there

- Earth looks really good compared to this. Ghent got off easy @- @

- Drust don't snap! ;; HANG ON

- The details *^*

- The references to the other fairy tales YES

- Those weapons may not fit in so well on Earth. *laugh*

- AWWh she remembers that they were friends T - T *feels*

- *imagines little Elayra and little Ghent* so adorable.

- I love all of this

- THIS IS SO GOOD
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And you were correct in presuming that (I had forgotten to mention a time! x'D) I'd say it closed around 6:00, and by now it's nearing 7-ish. 

In regards to the plot, I do not mind at all -- actually, I feel a bit guilty for having gotten off so easily! x'D Over the years I've usually "winged it" for plots (doesn't usually end well) but this is all so detailed and fascinating. I will try to help pull my weight, so it isn't a burden on you or anything like that. ^^' Eventually, I'd love to make some fan art of this! 

I am all for the side-quest idea! Hm...perhaps like the Horcruxes in Harry Potter? They wouldn't have to destroy those-said objects, of course...not unless we wished them to. :'D They could be something to help bring her down, as you said. They could be weapons, or...pieces of one larger object...heart pieces? *Zelda moment* Just tossing ideas out there! 

Thank you so very much for the feedback! I must say, this has opened my eyes. First, thank you very much for the compliments. I really do enjoy writing different personalities, so I am touched that you liked them. Secondly, I will definitely keep myself aware of that! I am so guilty of being unclear at times...and that doesn't just go for my writing, either. Heheh. I'll improve! *determined face* And I will try to improve my paragraph-skills as well. :D Can't wait to get started on my reply!! I already have some ideas. 

I'm seriously excited to see when everyone meets. xD