[quote=@POOHEAD189] [@Darkraven]Very well made character. You might need to de-power her a tiny portion, but not by much and I'll let you know if I think changes should be made for the future.[/quote] Sure, no problem. Lemme know how to de-power her at your convenience. It might be a while though, because I foresee that it'd be some time before she's forced to reveal her true self whether by magical spell or 'death'. Much of her abilities are muted in the meantime. It's also not mentioned in the RP, but changes in her will be gradual even after she's reverted to her demonic form. Memories will take time to resurface, her abilities will have to grow stronger again over time. Hell, she might even have trouble walking on hooves after reversion :D That's not to mention the identity crisis and trauma that would be sure to come. [quote=@POOHEAD189]Atm though I just have questions. I assume the Knights she was with were a holy order, and if so, would they not have magical items to detect her?[/quote] Other than the below, Ushael is one of the best Succubus out there (though by no means the best, I bet *gasps*), one of the few if not the only one who could take on a deep disguise and materialise true flesh and blood to cover hers. Much of her demonic essence was hidden away her new skin and flesh hid her true physical form. History did the rest - she was found by members of the order to be killing a demon, and since she's genuinely living the life of one of their own, could never arouse any kind of suspicion beyond the kind that didn't matter. She's been killing demons ever since, and yeah, it definitely helps that she's pretty much a saint and drop-dead gorgeous. [quote=@POOHEAD189]Then again, I take belief as a large part of my lore, so perhaps since she had amnesia, at that time she WASN'T considered demonic, even despite her nature within. Plus, many of the Knights might be enamored with her and would not heed such warnings anyhow. But still, the question remains. [/quote] Yeah, pretty much these too. [quote=@POOHEAD189]Also, is her daughter full human?[/quote] I've been asking myself that question for the entire week. Surprisingly, it's one of the harder things to decide. But since I've based this character on pop-cultural depictions as well as folklore, I'm going to stick with it. Her daughter's a demon, but since she's born from Jezebeth's disguise, she'd assume the shape of a human being until her death. In the meantime, she's going to start wondering why she's barely aging even when she's in her late golden years. Unless Mama-Succuby tells her that her entire life has been a lie. Oh well, it's not like this is the first time Ushael's a mother :D She'll know what to do best. Hyuck hyuck. [quote=@POOHEAD189]Make her race, Human (Andredian), if that is where she considers herself from.[/quote] Andredian, definitely. Do let me know what else you want changed or added, and when I can throw Jezebeth into the Character tab. In the meantime, I'm wondering if you're fine with this major change before I implement it: - Make her entire suit of armour painful to the touch for demons (but otherwise causing very little actual harm)? They can still rip it off her if they ignore the pain though - Wrath Demons are especially good at that. Also, how do you envision my character starting out? I'm thinking that maybe you guys could stumble on the remains of her Guardian Order camp? She'd probably be busy burying the last few corpses of her comrades she has left to take care of. Unless you guys want things tough on your characters, the camp could still have an armoury and food store, but no one left to use them.