[@Grombus]

Ok, so, my opinion on your character. I do appreciate the general mood you've set. In fact, it remembers me a bit of Poe style stories, so I do really like it.

That said, while vagueness, insanity and subtlety are good things for a novel, or maybe a horror/mystery RP, in a PVP focused game such as this one, you could do us a favor of adding some objective notes on how your character's powers work, and what they do.

As for your character's background, a bit of stretch to explain how/why he got on a war ridden plane of existence such as the Nexus would be appreciable, even if backgrounds hardly make any difference in the long run, keeping the continuity stable is a good.

That was all I had to say at the moment. Sorry for the wait, but RL is kind of a very capricious lady, y'know?